Analysis Of Preliminary Video

After analysing our preliminary video, i noticed that there was several problems with the video.
The first been that in the opening sequence which consists of the male walking towards to camera. This sequence goes on for far too long which doesn't makes the sequence appear suspense which is against what we was trying to achieve. During this sequence the male also looks at the camera a couple of times. This makes the video appear unprofessional and the level of acting must improve for our actual thriller.
The second fault occurs as a result of poor editing. This is when the male enters the door. The continuity editing is of a poor standard and makes the video appear 'jerky' and it doesn't appear natural. The poor standard of continuity editing also appears again at the 16 second mark. The transformation from one angle to the other wasnt a smooth transition and as result makes the video appear 'jerky'.